User talk:Wainscemuc/sandbox

1: The opening is good, I agree there was a lot of unnecessary information in there even with the rest of the site so the majority of your edits will be cutting done what evens it. 2: The order is good too, I know that this is not all of the wiki articles so if you find a weird order with the rest I am sure you'll fix it 3: Did a good job staying neutral and taking out the political stuff. I think taking the politics out of it us the most important part. 4: Checking the sources with all this is going to be hard since there is so much information. Moore4jp (talk) 21:33, 29 October 2018 (UTC)