User talk:Walru5hunterofficial

April 2017
Hello, I'm Materialscientist. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Seven Lions, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Materialscientist (talk) 08:24, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: HALIENE (April 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:HALIENE and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the or on the.
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SwisterTwister  talk  20:16, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Your Submission at Articles for Creation: Draft:HALIENE
Hello. I just came across your draft, HALIENE. It looks quite good, but you should also include the real name and date of birth of that person. Other than that, it looks great and you can notify me on my talk page when you have done these improvements so that I can review your draft, and if the issues are fixed, accept it. L293D (☎ • ✎) 12:52, 22 February 2018 (UTC)

Thank you L293D! I have found her real name is "Kelly Sweet" as per two interviews I could use help getting this review approved now. Another editor has since rejected it saying its not written in formal encyclopedic tone. Is there anything you can see in here to help improve the tone? I copied the style and tone from similar articles such as Gareth_Emery using the same verbiage and sentence structure. Walru5hunterofficial (talk) 16:14, 1 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Good. It is still missing a proper birth date, but other than that, your draft is quite good. When you have added her birth name and date, you can notify me on my talk page. Have a great day! L293D (☎ • ✎) 16:20, 1 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Great. I found her birthday here: and I've updated the article with the name and birthday info. Walru5hunterofficial (talk) 17:10, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Famousbirthdays.com is not reliable per Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_153. --Ronz (talk) 23:11, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Kelly Sweet exists already. Same person? --Ronz (talk) 23:16, 1 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, I just realized it does. You are welcome to improve that page, however, as your draft is quite better than the existing article. L293D (☎</b> • <b style="color:#000">✎</b>) 02:51, 2 March 2018 (UTC)


 * so Kelly Sweet goes under the HALIENE alias now. Wondering can we merge the Kelly_Sweet article with the haliene draft? The existing article is quite out of date and basically ends off where haliene begins... which makes sense since thats probably when she switched to a different name. Walru5hunterofficial (talk) 07:34, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi Walru5hunterofficial. Yes, the articles will need to be merged at some point. The benefit of working longer with the draft article is the required reviews that go with the AfC process. Good luck. Let me know if you would like further help. --Ronz (talk) 15:55, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: HALIENE (February 26)
<div style="border: solid 1px #FCC; background-color: #F8EEBC; padding: 0.5em 1em; color: #000; margin: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mar11 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:HALIENE and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:HALIENE, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:HALIENE Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Mar11&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:HALIENE reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Mar11 (talk) 07:53, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: HALIENE (March 6)
<div style="border: solid 1px #FCC; background-color: #F8EEBC; padding: 0.5em 1em; color: #000; margin: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bearcat was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:HALIENE and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:HALIENE, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:HALIENE Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Bearcat&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:HALIENE reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Bearcat (talk) 05:31, 6 March 2018 (UTC)