User talk:WanyunS

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Media Ethics
I have redirected this article, as there already exists one at Media ethics. Please check for existing articles before creating new ones. --Calton | Talk 12:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Review of Article: Media Ethics
Hey!

I have just read the edits that you have made for the media ethics page. Fist of all, great work! Overall your sources are great! Also, you have done a good job keeping your tone academic with no bias showing. I just have a few notes for you:

1. "Technologically advanced media including those that are internet-facilitated have diffused into and reshaped almost all aspects of contemporary existence.” [be more specific about “almost all aspects of contemporary existence…eg. give a list of aspects it’s changed]

2. Do you have a source to quote for the claim that ethical issues stem from "internet regulation, cross-cultural ethics, internet research ethics” ext…? A source would make this claim stronger

3. If I could offer one more piece of advice to strengthen your article, it would be to elaborate a little more on the 5 principals of practice.

Good Luck with your article!

Cheers — Preceding unsigned comment added by JeanFrankso (talk • contribs) 17:37, 30 March 2017 (UTC)