User talk:Warbeard

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Hello! Cool page. Creason.e (talk) 15:03, 5 October 2015 (UTC)

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Major Points: The author expands upon the Wikipedia page Revelle factor. The introduction could benefit from writing out what pCO2, DIC, DIC stand for as well as keeping the links that were in the original paragraph. The Revelle factor equation could also benefit from being presented in equation format. Although I am unsure as to whether Wikipedia offers this feature. The author’s edits to The Revelle Effect section increase clarity and readability.

Minor Points: The Contents section should be in its own box with links to each section. The links to other articles that were in the original article should be kept in the new edits and new links made. New citations should be added and used throughout the article. The image is a nice touch but could use a comment and source underneath. In the section Thermodynamics ‘acceptation’ should be ‘exception’. Hollisrenee3 (talk) 17:16, 18 November 2015 (UTC)