User talk:Wareagle1856/Auburn University Chapel

Peer Review (Jem0156)
I believe that you did a great job of adding content to this Wikipedia article, and there's only a few things I think could be improved. At the end of the second sentence of the second paragraph, it mentions 1921 as the initial date on which the chapel became the YMCA, but then reads "for a few years", directly followed by 1927 in the next sentence, making the reader infer the time gap to be six years. I think that if you changed the phrase to "for six years" it'd be easier for the reader to comprehend the chapel's history. I'm making this comment just for clarity's sake, but I also think that you could add a header for the third paragraph and make it its own section of the article. I can understand how ghost stories are pertinent to the discussion of this building's history, but the sudden shift from its history up until the present to stories about apparitions of the 1920s is a bit off-putting. The only other thing I thought could improve this article is a reevaluation of sources, potentially citing more of them (if there's any available of course), but ultimately this was a well-written, neutral addition to Wikipedia in my opinion. Jem0156 (talk) 15:35, 27 September 2023 (UTC)