User talk:Waritsara.tir

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ICCH224 Week 01
--Taweetham (talk) 02:38, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 02:05, 4 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 02
--Taweetham (talk) 15:46, 3 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Task 1
 * An example of student edit on the article; Special:Diff/726039144
 * A warning message that the student received on his/her talk page; Special:Diff/829456350
 * Task 2
 * An example of student edits on the article; Addition: Special:Diff/636728177 and Removal: Special:Diff/634705830
 * A warning that the student received on his/her talk page; Special:Diff/828743145/prev
 * Task 3
 * An example of a student who have been warned about the copyright violation; Special:Diff/786345747
 * An example where copyrighted media is deleted from Wikimedia common and removed from the an article; Special:Diff/689438940


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --SoonLorpai (talk) 18:48, 10 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 03
--SoonLorpai (talk) 18:48, 10 May 2019 (UTC)

1. My proposed topic (Existing topic): Atheronals 2. Brief outline of the contributions to the article 3. Examples/template/related articles that I will use as a model to develop my nominated article — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waritsara.tir (talk • contribs) 12:23, 15 May 2019 (UTC)
 * The state of the current article seem to be incomplete because the article only contain a brief description about the Atheronals.
 * I think the structure and existing content is quite appropriate since there is Article name. Moreover, the picture of the Atheronals for the both types contain captions and there is also no warning about the copyright violation.
 * I will add a new section that emphasise and describe more about the reaction between cholesterol and ozone. This section would be called "Process in forming Atheronols (Ozonolysis)".
 * References for the article
 * Tomono, S., Miyoshi, N., Shiokawa, H., Iwabuchi, T., Aratani, Y., Higashi, T., … Ohshima, H. (2011). Formation of cholesterol ozonolysis products in vitro and in vivo through a myeloperoxidase-dependent pathway. Journal of lipid research, 52(1), 87–97. doi:10.1194/jlr.M006775 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2999934/
 * Tomono, Susumu & Miyoshi, Noriyuki & Sato, Kazuaki & Ohba, Yoshihiro & Ohshima, Hiroshi. (2009). Formation of cholesterol ozonolysis products through an ozone-free mechanism mediated by the myeloperoxidase-H2O2-chloride system. Biochemical and biophysical research communications. 383. 222-7. 10.1016/j.bbrc.2009.03.155 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19345674
 * My article will have similar style/formatting/tone to this article:
 * Lactic_acid
 * Ozone
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Teetee taw (talk) 15:49, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 04
--Teetee taw (talk) 15:49, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for your work. Please quickly revise your work accordingly: You have until the end of today (25 May UTC+7) to revise your work to the standard. --Taweetham (talk) 01:57, 25 May 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) WP:MOS:  Internal links are missing.  I have added some of them as an example for you.  After you have added the links, you will understand that part of your work can be removed as it has been explained elsewhere.
 * 2)  WP:REF: You will need to cite more sources to support three paragraphs that you have added.  Citation can be done by cite journal.
 * 3) WP:NOT/Writing_better_articles:  Make sure that you write in an encyclopedic tone.
 * ✅ A reference may be used more than once in a article. You need to provide a name for the reference in the ref tag.  When the ref is used for the second time, you will be able to call the reference by that name. --Taweetham (talk) 04:12, 26 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 05
--Taweetham (talk) 04:12, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ - Please check out Manual of Style/Linking. --Taweetham (talk) 01:12, 1 June 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 06
A volunteer has accepted to be your reviewer. The reviewer will be in contact with you shortly. --Taweetham (talk) 01:09, 1 June 2019 (UTC)

Hello, Yelly! I'm so sorry for getting to you so late. I am glad you have chosen a rather interesting topic! Let's walk through this point by point:


 * 1. Ozonolysis
 * If you have not yet taken organic chemistry I (ICCH221), then you may not be familiar with ozonolysis. To put it very simply and in no chemical terms, you're just cutting a double bond in half and inserting oxygens at the cut.
 * Try to compare the structure of cholesterol to atheronal-A and spot the difference!
 * Get ahold of any organic chemistry textbook (Ajarn Pakorn uses Vollhardt & Schore which should be available in the MUIC library) and I'm pretty sure they cover ozonolysis somewhere. The mechanism is rather complicated and even in organic 1 we do not expect you to understand that. However, if you are curious or are thinking of inserting a figure of the mechanism as your media contribution, catch me sometime and I can help you with that.


 * 2. Some Formatting
 * I think that the information you have added under "Ozonolysis of cholesterol" is beyond the title itself. Perhaps you can separate them into different sections.
 * I have just noticed you have made corrections to the "introduction" of the article in your sandbox. Add them to the article!


 * 3. Figures
 * Think about what kinds of media contribution (figures, videos, etc.) you may want to add to this article. Be creative and artistic!


 * 4. Recommended References
 * I did a (rather lengthy) internet search and found a few references I believe is interesting. If you want to, you can read through the entire thing, but I personally would not. The methods and experimental section in general could be skipped. If the abstract makes no sense, begin with the introduction. It should give you a good enough background for you to be able to vaguely picture what is going on:
 * https://pubs.acs.org/doi/pdf/10.1021/bi0604330
 * This paper talks about the role atheronals play in atherosclerosis (a disease where you have plaque build up along the walls of the arteries, clogging them up). The introduction gives a good overview and you can follow their references for further explanation.
 * You mentioned atherosclerosis in the third paragraph of the section and I think that this could supplement what you have already done :)

Keep in mind that you don't have to do everything I have listed by this week, so don't feel overwhelmed. They are merely suggestions, and you have the option to accept/reject them and come up with what you think should be your next steps. Let me know if I can help with anything! --SoonLorpai (talk) 15:45, 5 June 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 07
For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: --Taweetham (talk) 05:49, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 08
For your information, the list below may be useful to you:

--Taweetham (talk) 01:46, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 12
Congratulations! You have completed the work and the grade is now available on Canvas. --Taweetham (talk) 08:32, 16 July 2019 (UTC)