User talk:Warof1812GWU/sandbox

Peer Review
I loved your article! I don't see any bias or unbalanced perspectives so most of what I have to say is just grammatical (and your choice if you want to change). I don't know if you are adding to an article or writing a new one so some of these might not apply.

You can say "it" instead of "the war" in your lead: "The War of 1812 was unpopular in Britain even before it began."

You could say "for" here instead of "due to" just to simplify it: "The public was not in favour of the war for economic and moral reasons..."

I would say "conflict" instead of "battle" here: "...continued the war as part of their larger conflict in Europe." You could also specify what the conflict is if you are writing your own article.

I would split this into 2 sentences: "...when the British had attacked the USS Chesapeake. Many thought this would lead to war."

I would split this into 2 sentences: "...and this included the United States. The U.S. claimed..."

I'd add "British" here to make it clearer: "Almost every British industry was affected by the policy..."

I would change "like" to "such as" here since you used "like" in the preceding sentence: "Cities such as Liverpool, which relied heavily on..."

You could add a comma and change "the" to "this" here: "...relied heavily on American shipping, felt the loss of this trading partner in their economies."

You can make "spring" lower case and change "tool" to "toll" here: "By the spring of 1812, Parliament had seen the toll the orders took on..."

I would change "the" to "this" here: "...came from general opposition to war in Britain during this time."

This is up to you, but you could add "country" here: "The nation had become the most militarized country in the world."

I would start a new paragraph using this sentence: "For those not in the military, the wallet was where the war affected them."

Delete "the" here: "...burned the White House, along with much of Washington, D.C."

Make "other" plural: "Others feared it might weaken their position..."

Capitalize "Parliament" here: "...part of the reason that Parliament decided to end the war..."

These changes are completely up to you! Cvanderwood (talk) 20:38, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

Aashna Peer Review
Your Wikipedia entry looks really interesting. You have managed to synthesize a lot of content coherently. In some places the piece may benefit from being slightly more narrative, but this is only in the introductory sentences of each section which can read more like an essay. Otherwise, the whole piece is informative and flows very well. You also integrate a range of sourced material and paraphrase them effectively. And of course, it looks very professional and like a good piece of Wikipedia mastery already. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aashna18 (talk • contribs) 03:46, 11 April 2018 (UTC)