User talk:Warren363

Your submission at Articles for creation: Genovation Cars (January 9)
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SeraphWiki (talk) 09:52, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Warren363, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines, and may not be retained.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Genovation Cars (February 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Genovation Cars and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Genovation Cars, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
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Theroadislong (talk) 17:39, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Genovation Cars has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Genovation Cars. Thanks! Bkissin (talk) 18:56, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Genovation Cars (April 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

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EROS message 10:46, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Genovation Cars
Greetings. To cut down promotional tone, try to reduce lines which are technical. Cuz, with technical info, it'll seem like the article was extracted from a brochure. Eg. In February, 2016 the GXE piloted by Johnny Bohmer, set IMRA certified records of 209mph top speed and 190.48mph in the standing mile, Fastest Standing Mile (Electric Car), Fastest Top Speed (Electric Car). If any question persist, do ping me or contact the AfC Helpdesk, link embedded on your declination banner. EROS message 03:30, 26 April 2018 (UTC)