User talk:Wasmr23/sandbox

1. Doesn't have a lead (one sentence summary of what the person did in their life/ what the article is about). 2. Organize information into sections (Biography, Air Force Nurse, Early life, Legacy, etc.). 3. Add dates. 4. Sentence suggestion: "During the Korean War many U.S. troops required assistance. Over the course of four days, Keil and other members of the 801st --- evacuated 4,700 Marines that were injured during the Battle of Chosin Reservoir." Annariptide19* (talk) 23:39, 12 March 2020 (UTC)