User talk:Wasted Time R/Sandbox/mcc-temper

Ordering
The ordering generally looks okay. I don't want to swear to it, though. As you may have noticed, I have focussed mainly on the main McCain article, because I evidently don't have as much time to waste as you do. :-)

One suggestion: regarding all these people he's had flare-ups with (e.g. Shelby), maybe it would be good to mention whether McCain has reconciled and obtained an endorsement.Ferrylodge (talk) 00:51, 5 May 2008 (UTC)


 * OK, I'll proceed on smoothing this. We can always further revisit ordering.  As for endorsements, he's the presumptive nominee, and so it doesn't mean much.  Witness this amusing story on the Cochran endorsement.  Wasted Time R (talk) 00:58, 5 May 2008 (UTC)