User talk:Water392

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Tamra Davis
Minor revisions needed. CropMilk (talk) 15:19, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Good job! Well-structured with good sources overall.
 * Ensure that all your factual claims are cited; typically, at least one citation per sentence is required.
 * Keep the tone formal and precise throughout so that it's clear that you are citing another author's opinion and not your own, i.e. "some of the thorniest acts in popular music", “Whether it had been laughter or sadness she did not care.”
 * Ensure that your citations are not to proxy links (if “proxy.library.carleton.ca” shows up in the URL, it’s a proxy link!)