User talk:Water392/Tamra Davis/Blooming sunflower Peer Review

Tamra Davis Hello! I really enjoyed reading your Wikipedia article, super informative, especially the section about career, it was super detailed and informative. Here are my notes to improve it: I would add some more information to the beginning, making it longer than a sentence. I’m not sure where you got all your information for the “Early Life” as there is no sourcing on any of the information except their collage. You use a very diverse categories to talk about Davis’ life! Great job! As your external link, unfortunately IMDb is not usable as a source as anyone can edit this information. Unfortunately the link to the “Take a shot at ‘Guncrazy’ - Michael MacCambridge does not work. It brings me to a “Document Unavailable” page. Your tone is really good, it doesn’t sound promotional or biased!