User talk:Waterwindsail/Sandbox

My general comment on this page at this time is for you to include some inline referencing so that we can see exactly (to the page where possible) where each of the notabilities etc of the person are reflected in third party references you have listed at the bottom. If you go to any high quality article with such reference systems you will be able to see the coding used to put such references in. Hope that assists.-- VS talk 22:48, 17 April 2008 (UTC)