User talk:Wboy02/History of Hawaii/Lyndiems Peer Review

peer review follow-up
I agree with @Lyndiems that this draft is looking good. We talked in class about adding another section similar to the one you added here in the draft. I think that's a good idea and you can use the section you added as a template for additional updates. KGS8TH (talk) 14:37, 27 March 2023 (UTC)