User talk:Wbriusa/Washington Bangla Radio on Internet

Requesting editorial advice on the article in my user page. Thank you. Wbriusa (talk) 05:23, 27 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Just some things; you may have to change your username, as Wikipedia does not allow names that are promotional of a company. Since you are writing an article about your company, I would also read a plain and simple conflict of interest guide and some FAQs for organizations. I'll let someone else check the article. Happy editing! David 1217 01:28, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I second the suggestion for a name change&mdash;see WP:RENAME for instructions. As far as the article, this is a good start. I suggest you replace vague claims like "pioneered digital music download sales" with cited data, if available &mdash; otherwise, this could be interpreted as puffery. Additional references are always helpful, although you've done a good job so far. There are also a couple of grammatical mistakes; see for details. I'm marking this request as 'helped'&mdash; feel free to unmark it if you would like more feedback, or ask additional questions here. Feezo (send a signal | watch the sky)  08:41, 29 May 2012 (UTC)