User talk:Webarnold/sandbox

Maggie's Peer Review
I like the opening paragraph with the background of solastalgia - it's clear and concise. In the second paragraph, I think it would be good to expand on why groups that depend upon agroecosystems are particularly susceptible. Also, you could go into a little more detail (with maybe a specific example) for the sentence "There are many examples of this across the continent of Africa, where the number of environmental refugees has increased in recent years"? The only minor grammatical issue I can see is that the phrase "the continent of Africa" is repetitive; you can just say "Africa". Maggiep (talk) 17:30, 27 February 2018 (UTC)