User talk:Webtrix

September 2009
Welcome to Wikipedia. The recent edit you made to Charles Dale Memorial International School has been reverted, as it appears to have removed content from the page without explanation. Use the sandbox for testing; if you believe the edit was constructive, please ensure that you provide an informative edit summary. You may also wish to read the introduction to editing. Thank you. Barret (talk) 14:01, 13 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Looking at the article on CDMIS, I agree that there are errors when comparing the text against the school's website. The correct approach is to fix the errors rather than deleting the article outright. Deletion discussion would focus on whether the school should have an article, not the accuracy of the current version. —C.Fred (talk) 14:21, 13 September 2009 (UTC)
 * To reinforce that point, I have cleaned up the article myself. I have not looked for independent sources, but I have rewritten the History section so far based on the school's website. —C.Fred (talk) 14:37, 13 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Do be careful adding text to the CDMIS article to make sure it is written in neutral point-of-view. I deleted a large block of text that you added because it was written in the tone of advertising or promotion. In general, article text should never be written in the first person; it should be written as a third-person description. —C.Fred (talk) 20:34, 13 September 2009 (UTC)