User talk:Wellcaffeinated109/sandbox

Peer Review 2/21
Marriage and Homemaking:

Things I like:♥ - I think this is a very interesting section to add to the page that will help improve this page! - The book is a good source to use that is reliable

Things to improve: - cite sources - make sure to italicize the title of the book when introducing it in the first line - maybe instead of using so many quotes from the book, translate what the author is saying into your own words - explain more on who Darlene Piña and Vern Bengston are

Peer Review 2/21
- I love the topic! I think the book is a great source and give great information on the topic.

- Italicize book titles :)

- You say "academics" but don't really establish their credibility. Make sure you site your sources too! ♥

- Maybe use less quotes and paraphrase — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bear102938 (talk • contribs) 21:13, 21 February 2019 (UTC)