User talk:Wendyhtse/sandbox

Reference List Code
You should add the reference list code. Yarneja (talk) yarneja — Preceding undated comment added 19:29, 1 December 2014 (UTC)

Additional Comments
I think that you have a great start. This seems a little bit short on information, but I feel as though you will be able to find more in your coming research. I liked that you broke up your sections, something that I need to do in my own Wikipedia article. Yarneja (talk) yarneja

Feedback
As a suggestion, it might make the article a little bit more clear and easy to understand if you incorporated a small portion of her film career in her Bio. I suggest this, because people tend to skim over the first two or three sentences of an article and at a quick glance there is no relation to film. Overall, the structure of your article is good. Sections are clearly titled and it is easy to read and understand. Good Job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtpm21 (talk • contribs) 16:52, 2 December 2014 (UTC)