User talk:WesPeng/sandbox

Hello Wesley,

Thanks for the draft! I have a few comments:
 * Nice picture!
 * Add a couple more internal links to get to the required eight internal links to Wikipedia articles (I counted six)
 * The citations are good quality, but you need to work on formatting them to show up as Wikipedia-style inline citations, which look more like footnotes.
 * Writing displays good neutrality

Let me know if I can help with getting your citations formatted correctly. -Ms Becvar Kairyth (talk) 17:36, 7 April 2016 (UTC)