User talk:Wescoast11/sandbox

Brandon's Review
Everything looks great both structurally and grammatically. Information is presented neutrally and concisely. The main thing that I think this needs is a few more in line citations to support some of the claims made in the Royal Forests section. While it's too late to add any more significant changes, if you wish to continue to work on this after the semester is over, I would recommend adding more information from other areas of the medieval world if it exists. Other than that, these are good additions to the existing article. Howardbm97 (talk) 10:57, 25 November 2018 (UTC)