User talk:WhatchootalkinboutWillis

July
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. One of the core policies of Wikipedia is that articles should always be written from a neutral point of view. Please remember to observe our core policies. OhNo itsJamie Talk 23:44, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to make constructive contributions to Wikipedia, at least one of your recent edits did not appear to be constructive and has been reverted. Please use the sandbox for any test edits you would like to make, and read the welcome page to learn more about contributing constructively to this encyclopedia. Thank you. .`^) Paine Ellsworthdiss`cuss (^`.  02:23, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
 * PS. Please double check WP:Burden before adding text to articles. Thank you very much!

Billy the Kid
"Don't touch my contibutions when there is no need to." Gee, let's examine that statement. Please look at the bottom of the edit window when it's open: "Please note: If you don't want your writing to be edited mercilessly or redistributed for profit by others, do not submit it." Don't be arrogant enough to assume that your contributions will be set in stone as soon as you hit save page. They also need to be grammatically correct, factually accurrate and reliably cited. So let's examine what you wrote, which you changed in front of and around an already referenced section:

"...Regulators were having a meal when an old buffalo hunter known as Buckshot Roberts, whom they suspected of involvement in the Tunstall slaying, Rode into the mills to check the little post office located there for his mail. George Coe confronted Roberts asking him to surrender. Roberts however, refused to be taken alive and a gun fight ensued. Even after he suffered a severe bullet wound to the chest."

Bottom line problems:
 * No cite to support that it was during a meal.
 * No establishment of what "the mills" is, other than to assume it is some sort of shortening of the actual town name, but in any case, unclear and vague.
 * No establishment, nor for that matter need, of why the man rode into "the mills".
 * "a gun fight ensued" - um, the entire paragraph begins by saying that already.
 * "Even after he suffered a severe bullet wound to the chest." And what? So what? Because of what? That's a ungrammatical phrase that says, by itself, nothing.
 * You've add no reliable sourcing to support your changes. We can't take your word for it that this is "the truth". You have to prove it.

Sooooooo, "when there is no need to" is out the window. Your contributions were not an improvement to the page. Wildhartlivie (talk) 02:31, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

July 2009
This is the only warning you will receive for your disruptive comments. The next time you make a personal attack, you will be blocked for disruption. Comment on content, not on other contributors or people. Wildhartlivie (talk) 04:04, 16 July 2009 (UTC)