User talk:Whatischemistry/Foreign body reaction/Bsien002 Peer Review

Lead sentence i think should remove the word typical so that it is just "tissue response to a foreign body within biological tissue"

The lead section should not have that many examples and should be saved for later in the content section.

Needs to describe the article as a whole.

Content is relevant to the topic and in a organized fashion.

Content is also nonbiased and properly cited. Tested some of the source links and they worked fine.

Sources aren't cluttered and range from papers from 2014 to 2021.

Content information is also concise.

Includes pictures but need to make sure licensing is allowed.

Overall impression: Article is written well and information is presented concisely.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

whatischemistry

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Foreign_body_reaction https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Foreign_body_reaction
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead sentence i think should remove the word typical so that it is just "tissue response to a foreign body within biological tissue"

The lead section should not have that many examples and should be saved for later in the content section.

Needs to describe the article as a whole.

Content is relevant to the topic and in a organized fashion.

Content is also nonbiased and properly cited. Tested some of the source links and they worked fine.

Sources aren't cluttered and range from papers from 2014 to 2021.

Content information is also concise.

Includes pictures but need to make sure licensing is allowed.

Overall impression: Article is written well and information is presented concisely.