User talk:Whatsup will

Sparta nazi germany totalitarian states
I will change it to cleanup, that way a wider group of wikipedians can look at it. I think most likely the best way to fix the article is to add the relevant information to Sparta and Nazi Germany. As it stands now the page is an essay, from What Wikipedia is not, "Wikipedia entries are not... Personal essays that state your idiosyncratic opinions about a topic. Wikipedia is supposed to compile human knowledge, not serve as a vehicle for personal opinions to become part of human knowledge." Also, see No original research. It is however a lengthy article and could have information not already contained in the current articles about Sparta or Nazi Germany. cohesion [[User_talk:Cohesion|&#9742;]] 22:18, 18 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia...
...sorry that your first article got VfD'ed and glad to see that you understand the issues and are handling it well. Good luck! [[User:Dpbsmith|Dpbsmith (talk)]] 23:29, 20 Sep 2004 (UTC)