User talk:Whbryson

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Edna Henry Lee Turpin, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 21:20, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
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It still needs some improvements. A Wikipedia article needs to show notability with references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party independent published reliable sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. In this case, the extent of her publications shows this, but it needs to be proven better--this requires finding reviews of her books, and adding them as references. Second, remember not to copy from a web site or previous publication, even your own -- first it's a copyright violation, but, even if you own the copyright and are willing to give us permission according to WP:DCM, the tone will not be encyclopedic and the material will not be suitable. (Thus, there is generally no purpose in giving permission; it is better to rewrite.) This applies to the bio sketch.

The  list of publications need not show the locations of the books. It also needs to be rearranged in chronological order.

And the article needs links to other WP articles. See WP:FIRST for some general instructions.  DGG ( talk ) 21:31, 19 August 2012 (UTC)