User talk:Whitebear2

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The ref used in this edit is does not comply with WP:MEDRS and thus was removed.-- Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 23:58, 26 April 2010 (UTC)


 * As per this note above. Wikipedia needs to be based on published review article.  If you need help accessing any drop me a note. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 21:23, 31 August 2010 (UTC)


 * As an attorney you are more than welcome to contribute to medical articles ( as is everyone else ). Here is the paper you were trying to use properly formatted.


 * One should however try to use something published in the last 5 years as per the link above. Also the journal this was published in does not appear to be the best  as it is now no longer in publication. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 21:34, 31 August 2010 (UTC)


 * We are more than happy to have your help improving Wikipedia's medical. There are over 20,000 medical pages and only a few dozen people editing extensively.  I am unable to get access to the paper listed above.  One of the problems is this topic area is dealt with over many pages and of course there is a great deal of literature on it.  If you look at Atherosclerosis it is dealt with in greater detail. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 21:41, 31 August 2010 (UTC)

This might be a better reference for what you wish to write about being more recent review:



I can probably get you a full copy if you wish. We are Wikipedia are seriously understaffed! :-) Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 21:46, 31 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Do not worry about anything you wrote. I have been around here a long time and have developed a thick skin.  It takes time to learn how Wikipedia works and we where all are starting out once.  I hope you decide to stay and help improve things. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 22:33, 31 August 2010 (UTC)