User talk:Whook17

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Hello, Whook17, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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This article has some very important points that seem to be missing from the leading paragraph. I suggest focusing on including the most important parts of the article, such as the early movements and history of the politics in Seychelles. A strong lead paragraph reinforces the information included in the article. Also, I think some of your grammatical changes are necessary, but try to keep the wording straight to the point. Sheridanstills (talk) 05:00, 24 November 2019 (UTC)