User talk:WikiDan61/LATE

Is this getting there...?
Glad to edit however you'd like. The reason I put all the new headings and whatnot is that these are what the Wikipedia formatting outline is supposed to look like..?

Thanks,

Pete Nelson Pete Nelson from UKY (talk) 14:06, 13 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Are we getting to where we can swop in the new LATE entry?
 * thanks! 128.163.238.24 (talk) 21:03, 27 June 2024 (UTC)


 * The first comment I'd make is that the extensive use of bullet lists reduces the readability of the article. This is a great way to create an outline, but Wikipedia articles want to be more prose-like. As an example, I'd take this section:

and rewrite as:

Note here that I've replaced your valid citations with pseudo-citations so as not to have them cluttering this talk page. The entire article can benefit from this type of editing. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 15:27, 13 June 2024 (UTC)


 * I made some more edits, removed bullets and made the text more prose-like. Better? Pete Nelson from UKY (talk) 16:32, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Getting there. I've taken further steps: removing extraneous subheadings and odd indentations. I think there's still some redundancy to be addressed. As a specific example, you have a section on "Impact on patients" and a separate section on "Quality of life considerations". These seem like they are basically discussing the same issue and should be combined. There are also still some statements (and whole sections) that have no citations; that should be addressed. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 17:01, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for all the help Dan61!
 * I made suggested changes, I'm grateful for your complementary work.
 * LMK if more is needed,
 * Pete Pete Nelson from UKY (talk) 17:36, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Hi WikiDan, not sure if you're around but I'd be glad to make more changes if you'd like to the LATE site. Otherwise, could it be swopped in?
 * Thanks!
 * Pete Nelson, U. Kentucky Pete Nelson from UKY (talk) 14:51, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Can we make the switch-in to swop out the prior page for this one?
 * Thanks,
 * Pete Pete Nelson from UKY (talk) 20:25, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay -- sometimes life gets in the way. I think you've done some great work with this article, but I'm not an expert in the subject matter. I'd like to ask someone from WP:WikiProject Medicine to take a look. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 21:38, 27 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Sounds great! Thanks a ton.
 * Sincerely,
 * Pete N Pete Nelson from UKY (talk) 21:52, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

It does not appear that the community at the Teahouse is inclined to allow this version of the article to move forward. I recommend that you address yourself to WP:WikiProject Medicine for further advice. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 11:56, 8 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks WikiDan. That’s frustrating obviously. 2605:59C8:20C8:7310:C156:8588:B38B:E99D (talk) 12:32, 8 July 2024 (UTC)