User talk:WikiTome/Fern Reiss

Very quick feedback

 * lead
 * "media expert" screams WP:WEASEL
 * Write for the future: over 20 years won't be true when she's been doing it for over 30 years, but that phrase sounds a bit promotional to me, so I'd remove it altogehter.
 * What is the nternational Association of Writers?


 * published works
 * Are any of these works notable? If not I would make this a simple bulleted list at the end of the article
 * Amazon links should be avoided per point 5 of WP:ELNO
 * What's the Benjamin Franklin Book of the Year Award? If it's a recognised award, this could be the first real claim of notability and should be mentioned in the lead
 * Her Publishing Game books are all Writer’s Digest Book Club bestsellers.


 * media
 * I would be inclined to remove this section altogether—they all seem to be passing mentions, but I'm not seeing any substantial coverage


 * lectures
 * Most of these are unsourced, but the rest are all primary sources
 * I'm not sure there's much merit to keeping this in and certainly not as a bulleted list—many people with some academic expertise deliver lectures, they're not particularly notable

Overall, I'm left wondering why the subject is notable. Quite frankly, if this were moved to mainspace now, it would probably not survive an AfD. Sorry, HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?   17:53, 15 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Got it. Thanks for your time and the feedback, I'll be rewriting the article. Cheers! Wiki Tome  Talk 18:03, 15 February 2011 (UTC)

I agree with everything that HJ Mitchell stated above. A few additional points: You have what could be a notable person, but it on the gray side. Being the director of the International Association of Writers, but only if that group itself is notable. I think if you focus on her books and what coverage they have received, that might establish her notability. -- Gogo Dodo (talk) 05:41, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
 * You say that one of her books is a finalist for the Benjamin Franklin Book of the Year Award, but the reference links to the website's top level. You should link to the year-specific page with that particular book and probably mention that in the lede as in "Her book .... was a finalist for the whatever-year ..."'.
 * The article could use some citations to articles mainly about her instead of just in passing. For example, her Expertizing.com has a mention of her in the January 2005 issue of Fortune Small Business.  If you could find citation for that, that would help the article.
 * Or citations to reviews of her books, which would help establish her notability.
 * Probably should remove "publishing expert" from the lede unless you can find a citation that backs up the claim that she an expert.
 * Use citation templates. It makes the citations look better instead of just a link farm looking list.
 * You have no links to anything in the article.
 * The book titles should be italicized per WP:MOS-T.