User talk:Wikifixer339/sandbox

Feedback on 2nd draft

 * Inline citations/references have coding errors
 * Some references missing information. Review APA style and correct.
 * Word count is short (only looking at material under "First draft" section).
 * To include an image in an article, it must be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons and then linked from there. Pasting it into the Edit box won't work.

Michelev (talk) 20:20, 16 April 2014 (UTC)