User talk:Wikihustle/sandbox

Peer review for project 3 by Wikihusky07:

- About citations: I am not sure about it, but it seems like thee author is combining citations. is it for only the sentence before? or all sentences before? I think the author should double check that every sentence includes citations ( the first sentence lacks one for example) - i think the tone can be difficult for individuals that are not familiar with it? I think this type of text will mostly be understood by someone with at least high school degree. The content is great, but the language is complex too. In a wikipedia writing we want to be understood by every - the scope and topics section was interesting and engaging to read, especially, the different integrated disciplines. - I think the author did a good job linking other articles on wikipedia and adding proper types of sources for wikipedia.