User talk:Wikijaykay

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 19:03, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 20:48, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Country Club India Ltd
Hi

I am editing http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Country_Club_India_Ltd and it was declined as it looked ‘more like an advertisement’.

I request you to look at the following link. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Club_Mahindra_Holidays

I feel my contents are in the same line. Also, more or less, any article related to a commercial establishment does look like an ‘advertisement’ as it provides basic information about the company/organization.

Request you to kindly approve my articles. Else, please let me know how can I make it more ‘wiki friendly’.

Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wikijaykay (talk • contribs) 21:12, 18 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Hello there Wikijaykay,


 * Before anything else i feel i should point out that pointing to another article is called a WAX argument. Since anyone can start an article, not every single article's quality is the same, and the result is that some article's may be in a poor condition (Or may at least be a bad example to model an article after). Those article's may eventually be improved or removed, depending on circumstances. The article's for creation process has the advantage that an article won't be outright removed if something is wrong with it, but the standards for acceptation tend to be slightly higher since the idea is that an editor should be ascertained that their article is unlikely to be removed later on.


 * Having said that, if you need an example to model your article after, use the ones that are listed as a Good article. An article that qualifies as a good article has been checked for quality of writing, references et cetera, so they make a decent example. Personally i would recommend having a look at Pearson's Candy Company and Pike Place Fish Market, because they are well written decently referenced, while also being fairly short (thus reading them doesn't take ages). If you need an example, i would advice modeling your own article after these.


 * Kind regards, Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 18:36, 19 July 2012 (UTC)