User talk:Wikila23/Beggiatoa

Peer review

I reviewed your work and i think it has been carried out clearly and comprehensively. I didn’t find any particular mistakes, I just have some suggestions.

-In the Taxonomy paragraph this information "Another very interesting character is the ability to store nitrate inside the vacuoles of the fresh water species’ cells." it can be shifted to the metabolism paragraph or in the introduction for a better contextualization.

-During this period "Therefore, it is proposed that good environmental conditions will paradoxically cause cell death in order to enhance filament breakage thus reproduction", you can add who have proposed that, for example "the scientific community"

-In "Isolation using liquid media" paragraph you have added a reference in different modes. It can be more correct to add reference in the same way for all text.--D.Ascione (talk) 11:21, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for your adivice, they are very usefull! --Ilaria D&#39;Aniello (talk) 12:54, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Good job! You could specify that the color is given by the accumulated sulfur (I made this observation a few days ago on another sandbox maybe, since I don't see my review here. Anyway i saw you mentioned it, great job!) --Noone357 (talk) 18:31, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Reading again I saw that in "taxonomy" you say that nitrate vacuoles are of freshwater species, while in "morphology and motility" you attribute them only to marine species. To me personally this part is a bit confusing. --Noone357 (talk) 09:40, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

Thank you very much for the observations, we will correct the mistake. --Ilaria D&#39;Aniello (talk) 18:16, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

Accurate, I really appreciate your work; maybe there is only a string to fix. In the paragraph "isolation using liquid media" appears [(Mezzino et al., 1984; Schmidt et al., 1986).], maybe some errors occurred in the edit source of the page while you was adding the citation — Preceding unsigned comment added by GiuseGiowe (talk • contribs) 14:42, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

Yes, we have to fix it, thanks for reminding it. --Ilaria D&#39;Aniello (talk) 15:14, 9 December 2020 (UTC)