User talk:WikipedianDAK

The lead paragraph ("lede") is an ad
" The mission is to renew the ecological wisdom inherent in Judaism and to renew the Jewish Community through connection with God's Creation... dedicated to innovative, experiential Jewish education taught through the lens of the natural world"? That's promotional language, probably taken from or a paraphrase of a mission statement. It is not dispassionate, it is not impartial, it is not neutral, and it has no source other than the Center's own statements. People want to know what they do, not what their mission statement is; especially in the lede. -- Orange Mike  &#x007C;   Talk  17:58, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
 * "innovative, experiential Jewish education taught through the lens of the natural world" is still in there. It is still promotional language, probably taken from or a paraphrase of a mission statement. It is still not dispassionate, it is still not impartial, it is still not neutral, and it still has no source other than the Center's own statements. -- Orange Mike  &#x007C;   Talk  13:05, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Ignition Grant
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