User talk:Wikirjmpmb

Dubai College
I'm really making the effort to get citations into that article. It's not a place to just slap information on, you have to source it. While I know DC takes part in Young Enterprise and DOE, you still need to try and get some news reports or even internal sources...

Now, that aside, I want to discuss layout issues. Tables and Bulleted lists are not the best way to show data. They are only useful for skimming, or scanning for a lead which will guide the reader to more information on the topic. Definitely not for information such as that you edited here Dubai_College.

Thirdly, having a new section/heading, then putting one sentence into it is not the way to go. If there isn't enough info of significant importance, then all the subheadings can be compressed into the introductory paragraph. Makes for a much cleaner look. Headings clutter up the page dont you think? Especially if there's nothing under them...

Lastly, and maybe most importantly in terms of professionalism, please CHECK YOUR SPELLING. lot of misspellings in your recent edits. - bigforrap (talk) 18:08, 27 September 2010 (UTC)

Looks like you had trouble...
With something as simple as sending me a message :). Just here to tell you you can ask me about anything technical if you're having issues with WP.

And on another note, id rather save my perceived eloquence for the articles I write, and im usually pretty blunt. screw spell check when writing messages. just a note to you that with me, theres no need to go and 'smarten up' your argument, sounds the same to me either way:) - bigforrap (talk) 20:38, 27 September 2010 (UTC)

Misplaced anachronisms?
You said "...the page is still littered with anachronisms and misplaced sentences."

Fuelled by that...I combed the page, but couldn't find any sentences that seemed to be in the wrong section. As for anachronisms, I really dont get what youre referring to... bigforrap (talk) 15:09, 28 September 2010 (UTC)