User talk:Wikiwheels93/Spastic cerebral palsy

do you have time for some feedback? The previous person working on this page had very few citations so I'm starting from scratch somewhat --Wikiwheels93 (talk) 19:59, 17 March 2020 (UTC)
 * I have tomorrow off, so I will make sure to have something to you by Thursday! Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:50, 17 March 2020 (UTC)

here's some thoughts!
 * Wikipedia has a style guide about how things should be written so that our articles are consistent. One point of the style guide is that references should come directly after punctuation (no spaces). So it should be Sentence.[1] This is pretty easy to fix--you can drag and drop citations, or just move the punctuation to the other side of the reference
 * Your reference #9 (the Morais Filho et al.) is a primary source. It was written by people who first-hand conducted an experiment and wrote about the results. What Wikipedia wants for biomedical content is secondary sources, written by people who are not conducting experiments/descriptive studies themselves, but who are analyzing the results from primary studies. It would be great if you could find a secondary source here! This can be in the form of a literature review, or work put out by a respected body like many of your other sources.

Those are my two points! Otherwise this looks really good. Just minor formatting and then swapping out a source :) Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:09, 20 March 2020 (UTC)

thoughts on source #16 on the live Wiki article on this subject? It seems like it may be based on one study but unclear. --Wikiwheels93 (talk) 01:04, 21 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 16 looks okay to me, "Role of Anesthesiologist in the Management of a Child with Cerebral Palsy"? The last sentence of the abstract identifies it as a review ("This review highlights the clinical manifestations in CP and anesthetic considerations in such child presenting for various surgeries.") Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:55, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

how do you edit stuff in a column template? See types section of the live wiki. --Wikiwheels93 (talk) 18:57, 24 March 2020 (UTC)
 * It would be a little bit tedious to do in visual editor, so I just removed the columns for now. If we want to add them back in later once you've made your changes, that's fine (or we can leave it as is without them). Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:30, 24 March 2020 (UTC)

Also wondering how I can change the pic in the info box on the live page? Feel like we can do better than a random picture of a hand. --Wikiwheels93 (talk) 19:18, 24 March 2020 (UTC)
 * you can change the image by:


 * Identifying the file name on Wikimedia Commons of the image you think should be used
 * Going into edit mode
 * Clicking on the picture (this will bring up a popup for the template)
 * Click "edit" on the template popup
 * Scrolling until you see the field for "image" which is currently "Spastic Hand.jpg". Delete that file name, and paste in the file name you want to replace it with.


 * Hope that helps! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:30, 24 March 2020 (UTC)