User talk:Wikkyexpert

Abiya
Perhaps you may want to rewrite this article a little to decrease the promotional tone. The article should focus on the organization and its specfric work, not the general problem it is trying to solve. The reporting of a string of successes may not represent a NPOV  DGG ( talk ) 08:58, 24 July 2018 (UTC)

Hey, thank you so much for the review! I would look into this now. Do you think I should remove the background to the problem as well? Thanks again!

Hello again, I rewrote the article a bit. Could you please review it? It's my first reviewed article so it's all very new to me. Thanks!