User talk:WillG5150/Hockey jersey

Peer review
Hi Will! Per the peer review training it says to leave comments on the talk page. Here is what I wrote in my peer review

I think this is a great start. There is clear intentions to insert references which is great. I expected this to be a long definition of hockey jerseys so it was nice getting a little more than that. I think It would enjoy seeing a break down to the article in to 1) Definition, what is hockey (this would be a good opportunity to link the hockey wikipage) what is a jersey? why does hockey use jerseys? 2) Traditions with jerseys (I.E alternate jerseys) 3) Important Events (I.E showing support to the LGBTQ Community)

Some other questions I have are, who designed hockey jerseys? Most jerseys are really tight or aren't as baggy. Why are they baggy?

Overall a great start. Looking forward to reading more!!! Justinebrosio (talk) 02:31, 29 March 2024 (UTC)