User talk:WilmarisD/sandbox

Wilmaris, what topic will you be editing in Wikipedia? Please assign it to yourself. TrudiJ (talk) 00:05, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Wikipedia Article #1: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marketing I selected this article because there are many comments on it stating that it is very bias and written like a personal/argumentative essay. It is also long and missing citation for further credibility. I have found several sources on the topic of marketing that can be included and substituted for some of the information that is present in this Wikipedia article. This article can really use some editing and improvement. Scholarly source: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libproxy.albany.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=10&sid=10ac54cd-625a-457e-b0dc-3e446a86df5c%40sdc-v-sessmgr03&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=97181709&db=a9h

Wikipedia Article #2: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_marketing I selected this article because it states that it appears to contradict itself, which makes it confusing for the reader. It also lacks credible, scholarly information and sources on the subject. There are several scholarly sources that can be included in this Wikipedia article. it is in need of some revising and expert information so that it can make this article more credible and transparent. Scholarly source: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libproxy.albany.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=17&sid=10ac54cd-625a-457e-b0dc-3e446a86df5c%40sdc-v-sessmgr03&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=S1877042815052945&db=edselp

Wikipedia Article #3: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Direct_marketing I selected this article because it states that it has multiple issues such as needing more verification on its citations which will decrease the source's reliability. It also states that it contains content that is written like an advertisement. Including more reliable and scholarly sources will surly increase this article's credibility. Scholarly source: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libproxy.albany.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=24&sid=10ac54cd-625a-457e-b0dc-3e446a86df5c%40sdc-v-sessmgr03&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#AN=6CU92001071420190212005603&db=nsm