User talk:Wilton96

== Your submission at Articles for creation: Man vs Snake: The Long and Twisted Tale of Nibbler (June 12) ==  Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ringbang was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Ringbang (talk) 17:18, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Man vs Snake: The Long and Twisted Tale of Nibbler has been accepted
 Man vs Snake: The Long and Twisted Tale of Nibbler, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡)  06:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
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Notes about article creation
Hi! I thought I'd drop by and give a bit of a note about the article. I accepted the article, however this was only after I spent a good 30 minutes cleaning up the article. All you did was put a long string of citations at the end of the article, which wasn't really all that helpful. While some of the sources are usable to show notability, you didn't format them properly, nor did you actually use them in the article. When using sources you're supposed to use them to back up specific details, like award wins or review quotes/summaries. You didn't do this in the article, which was sort of a bit on the lazy side. I don't mean that to sound harsh, just that I've seen people turn down articles at AfC. When editing you should assume that your hands may be the last one to edit the article and as such, you need to make it as complete as the sourcing and Wikipedia constraints allow. Don't assume that others will do the work for you and/or if they do, that they will do so in a manner that you'd like. Again, I don't mean this to be harsh, just that you really need to do more than just throw sourcing at the end of an article. Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡)  06:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC)