User talk:Wingchoro

Welcome!

Hello, Wingchoro, and welcome to Wikipedia! While efforts to improve Wikipedia are always welcome, unfortunately your contributions are not written in English that is good enough to be useful. You appear to be more familiar with Japanese; did you know there is a Japanese Wikipedia? You may prefer to contribute there instead. In any case, welcome to the project, and thank you for your efforts!

ようこそ!

Wingchoroさん、はじめまして. 英語版ウィキペディアへようこそ. 英語版ウィキペディアへの投稿はいつでも歓迎いたしますが、残念ながら今回Wingchoroさんに執筆いただいた英文は英語版ウィキペディアの水準を満たしておりません. もしよろしければ、日本語版ウィキペディアの方へ投稿していただければ幸いです. ウィキペディア･プロジェクトへの参加ありがとうございます. -- DAJF (talk) 02:24, 3 September 2014 (UTC)

Promotional tone on Nemuro article
Hi. Thanks for adding material to the Nemuro, Hokkaido article. I have however added some maintenance tags to the article following your edits, as I feel the tone is heading in an overly promotional direction. If we are going to write about how wonderful the food is, we will need to back this up with third-party sources rather than simply quoting the town's tourist association website, which is naturally going to be full of gushing praise for the place. No immediate rush, but could you try and look for some more reliable (independent) sources and also trim the overly promotional language? Thanks. --DAJF (talk) 12:01, 3 September 2014 (UTC)