User talk:Winnerarkansas

The article on Sally Ride, astronaut, under her PERSONAL LIFE uses pronouns that detract from and lend ambiguity to the communication. It's unclear whose sister spoke up. I am suggestion that in lieu of pronouns (and perhaps risking some redundancy) proper names be used so there is conclusively no confusion on who is being (currently) referenced by the pronouns. Winnerarkansas (talk) 18:32, 23 June 2015 (UTC) [This is my FIRST... post/comment to Wikipedia.]