User talk:Winwiwil123

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ICCH224 Week 01
--Teetee taw (talk) 14:10, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 02
--Teetee taw (talk) 13:50, 21 September 2019 (UTC) Task 1 An example of student edit: Special:Diff/781850684/824735633 A warning message that the student received: Special:Diff/823761076/824920490 Task 2 Here is an example of an edit made by Myat T. Aung on the article Toxicology Special:Diff/636831004/634705830 Here is an example of an edit warning on Myat T. Aung talk page Special:Diff/636835165/636805545 Task 3 An example of a student who have been warned about the copyright violation; Special:Diff/786345747 An example where copyrighted media is deleted from Wikimedia common and removed from the an article; Special:Diff/689438940 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winwiwil123 (talk • contribs) 05:59, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 10:01, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 03
--Taweetham (talk) 10:01, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Winwiwil123 (talk • contribs) 07:25, 1 October 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) My proposed topic (Existing topic) Bond_energy.
 * 2) * The state of the current article seems incomplete because the article does not have picture and calculation method of Bond strength.
 * 3) ** The content seems appropriate.
 * 4) A brief outline of the contribution to the article.
 * 5) * I will add picture and some other formula such as ΔH = ∑ ΔH(bonds broken) - ∑ ΔH(bonds formed).
 * 6) * I will add a new section to show how to calculate Bond Enthalpy which is energy to break bond and some of examples.
 * 7) * Also, I will add table form and other pictures to make this topic become more understandable.
 * 8) * References
 * 9) ** March,Jerry(1985), Advanced Organic Chemistry: Reactions, Mechanisms, and Structure (3rd ed.), New York: Wiley, ISBN 0-471-85472-7
 * 10) ** IUPAC, Compendium of Chemical Terminology, 2nd ed. (the "Gold Book") (1997). Online corrected version: (2006–) "Bond energy (mean bond energy)". 10.1351/goldbook.B00701
 * 11) My article will be similar format/ style to this article:
 * 12) * Bond_energy This is the proposed article.
 * 13) * Bond-dissociation energy
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 09:59, 6 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 04
--Taweetham (talk) 09:59, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
 * As we discussed earlier today, please note that your article is not the same as bond-dissociation energy. -Taweetham (talk) 10:29, 8 October 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ You sandbox is not in format that is ready to be moved to the article.  Please do proper inline citation for your work and see if this is a positive addition to the existing article. You have 24 hr for re-submission. --Taweetham (talk) 15:21, 12 October 2019 (UTC)
 * If you need any help with this please let me know asap. --Taweetham (talk) 12:46, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 22:12, 16 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 05
--Taweetham (talk) 22:12, 16 October 2019 (UTC)

Bond_energy Here is the link — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winwiwil123 (talk • contribs) 11:29, 18 October 2019 (UTC)

Can you do the cleanup by merging the Notes section into References section. BTW, generally, external links should not be in the content of the article. You should create table(s) and/or figure(s) by yourself and refer to these links in References section. --Taweetham (talk) 01:22, 20 October 2019 (UTC)


 * Thanks for revising the article. Please see Talk:Bond energy if you can address issues raised there.  I can demonstrate to you how to create tables and equations in person.  Also, the in line external links  have yet to be removed from the article. --Taweetham (talk) 01:59, 24 October 2019 (UTC)

I have answered some of their questions. I created table already but dont no if it is okay or not. I wrote equation already dont no if it will work as well. I have removed external links already and move it to reference section already. Winwiwil123 (talk) 14:39, 24 October 2019 (UTC)


 * You have made a very good attempt at this. I am delighted to see your progress.  This is probably the best of four students at this point but it may be to early to make a conclusion.  Please learn from comments in the history of your page and see what others have done in addition to your changes to make your work acceptable to Wikipedia's standard. --Taweetham (talk) 05:25, 27 October 2019 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 05:25, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 07
For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: --Taweetham (talk) 05:25, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 08
Hi Winwiwil123! The image you added seems to come from a the article. This is WP:COPYVIO and it should be deleted from Wikimedia commons. It seems to me that you have added enough content but you need to reorganize the article to be coherent and consistent. An easy example is kJ/mol or kcal/mol - either is correct but SI is preferred and you should use one unit for the whole article. --Taweetham (talk) 06:49, 3 November 2019 (UTC)
 * I took care of deleting that copyvio image on commons. DMacks (talk) 05:45, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking care of this on Commons and in the article . Winwiwil123, WP:COPYVIO is the most serious violation and I will not tolerate it. --Taweetham (talk) 02:58, 5 November 2019 (UTC)
 * You're welcome! Let me know if there are any other admin tasks you need either here (en.wp) or commons for your students. DMacks (talk) 03:46, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 09
Hi Winwiwil123! Are we settled on the content or you wish to add anything further? --Taweetham (talk) 02:02, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

I am ok with my content. But you can request me to add more information any time. Winwiwil123 (talk) 03:17, 15 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 10
You are now assigned a mentor. --Taweetham (talk) 06:23, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 11
Your mentor will provide detailed feedback in the next few days. I have identified a number of problems at this point: Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC) Done Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:09, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) You have not updated the article since November 4, 2019.
 * 1) Do you understand the convention for variable to be italic and descriptive text to be subscript normal text?  Please study the convention and apply this consistently. I made examples at the top of the article for you.
 * 1) Chemical formula such as CO2 should be CO2.
 * 1) Homolytic cleavage should be added to the context of the first few paragraph of the article.
 * 1) Fix the kcal or kJ issue and the confusion template.
 * 1) The three sections at the end of the article should be rewritten.  I do not see connection between them and within each section the writing is still not logical.

--Taweetham (talk) 08:52, 23 November 2019 (UTC)
 * --Taweetham (talk) 08:36, 25 November 2019 (UTC)

October 2019
Hello. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia.

I noticed your recent edit to Bond energy does not have an edit summary.&#32;Please be sure to provide a summary of every edit you make, even if you write only the briefest of summaries. The summaries are very helpful to people browsing an article's history.

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Please use the edit summary to explain your reasoning for the edit, or a summary of what the edit changes. You can give yourself a reminder to add an edit summary by setting. I know this is mentioned in the training and guidelines materials that were given to you as part of your project. DMacks (talk) 06:22, 26 October 2019 (UTC)

Next time I will do it Winwiwil123 (talk) 04:20, 28 October 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 12
Hello, Winwiwil123! I'm so sorry for the late reply. I took a look at your article Bond energy and I think we can do with a bit of formatting: Thank you very much for your hard work! Let me know if there is anything I can help you with. --SoonLorpai (talk) 07:07, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Add a link to the page Bond-dissociation energy perhaps in the text at the beginning ("...average value of the gas-phase bond dissociation energies (usually at a temperature...") and to the See also section.
 * 2) * ✅ Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:08, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 3) Change ΔfHº(R) to ΔHfº(R).
 * 4) * ✅ Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:08, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 5) Consider making Dº(R−X) = ΔfHº(R) + ΔfHº(X) – ΔfHº(RX) into a separate line for clarity.
 * 6) * ✅ Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:54, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 7) Please follow the formatting guidelines for section headings. Section headings should be in sentence case where only the first word is capitalized. That is, Standard Bond Energies and Super-Strong, Super-Modulus Materials should be changed to Standard bond energies and Super-strong, super-modulus materials. See Manual of Style for more information.
 * 8) * ✅ Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:54, 27 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 9) The text in the section Standard Bond Energies could be revised. Be sure the units are consistent. Also, you might want to add a more credible reference for the average bond dissociation enthalpies such as Huheey, pps. A-21 to A-34; T.L. Cottrell, The Strengths of Chemical Bonds, 2nd ed., Butterworths, London, 1958 and S. W. Benson, J. Chem. Educ. 42:502 (1965).
 * 10) * Thank you I will add given references Winwiwil123 (talk) 07:58, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 11) For the last section: Super-strong, super-modulus materials, did you want Melting Temperature–Bond Energy Relation to be a subsection? It doesn't seem to be a complete sentence.
 * 12) * ✅ I deleted this section because it is not the main point and did not connect to the other sections Winwiwil123 (talk) 08:11, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 13) And lastly, be sure there are no duplicate references.
 * 14) * ✅ Winwiwil123 (talk) 04:53, 5 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Don't forget to make the font face consistent. Italic font should be strictly reserved for math variables. --Taweetham (talk) 01:27, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

Elsevier
Elsevier is not a journal. Please recheck your work on Phenolphthalein carefully. --Taweetham (talk) 11:45, 23 February 2022 (UTC)


 * Fixed it already kub. Thank you kub. -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 18:51, 23 February 2022 (UTC)

J-stage
J-stage is not a journal too. This is a serious mistake. Please carefully check all of references in Phenolphthalein. --Taweetham (talk) 12:28, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Fixed it already kub. Thank you for pointing it out kub. -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 3:01, 24 February 2022 (UTC)

Springer Link
This is not a journal too! --Taweetham (talk) 15:28, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Fixed it already kub. -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 3:02, 24 February 2022 (UTC)

https
Please use https instead of http whenever possible, for example, in your reference links. --Taweetham (talk) 06:46, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
 * I have only doi in my reference kub -- Winwiwil123 (talk) 3:03, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Understood. It is springer that resolve the doi into http://link.springer.com/10.1007/PL00013491 --Taweetham (talk) 08:56, 24 February 2022 (UTC)

แกล้งเพื่อนไม่ดี
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk%3APumin_Martin&type=revision&diff=1073789048&oldid=943655128 ฟ้าดินรู้เห็น --Taweetham (talk) 11:20, 27 March 2022 (UTC)


 * 5555555 ขำ ขนาดผมยังลืมเลยว่าผมเคยไปเขียนอะไรไว้ 124.122.141.130 (talk) 15:01, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
 * จารย์ ภูมินเขาทำครบ 12 weeks แล้วครับ แต่ทำไมหน้าเขามีแค่ถึง week 8 อีกครับ Winwiwil123 (talk) 15:05, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
 * คำโว้วววโห้ววว (ถ้าอัพ gif ที่ไม่ใช่ ของตัวเองในนี้มีสิทธิ์โดนไหมครับ) Winwiwil123 (talk) 17:28, 13 June 2022 (UTC)