User talk:Wittc4321

this is my talk page

Brief Bio
Corinne Music,Creative Writing

Reading

 * Very calming/stress reliever
 * Allows you to travel to other places for free while never leaving your seat
 * Helps you with your writing skills

Wittc4321 (talk) 17:33, 9 February 2016 (UTC)Corinne

Welcome!
Hello, Wittc4321, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Rhetorical Analysis
The page I edited was the Keloid page. The main strength of the page was how clear the introductory paragraph was when you first read the page. A main weakness was how many sources the page uses. The article was started on Dec. 2002. In the early stages, the page was very empty. Material was added slowly but got added almost every month. It was added by multiple users. There have been several changes made to the page since it was made and it's active but not as many people use it as often. The talk page was used a lot. The tone in this page seemed very conversational and there were a few user on the page that were from the history page. The edits I made were that I added another source and added some text to one of the sections. Wittc4321 (talk) 06:37, 11 February 2016 (UTC)Corinne