User talk:Wizardofrhetoricandmusic

Hello Wizard,

Welcome to Wikipedia. I made some alterations to your proposed changes to singing and musician. Please be careful not to overload articles with definitions that fall into separate scopes already covered by other articles. Overall, let's maybe dwell less on dictionary definitions - Wikipedia has a sister project, wiktionary, that deals with those. Instead, try using wikilinking ("wl" for short) to link to other articles that can take the reader further in an indicated direction. That in itself is a bit of a dark art, e.g. don't link trivial things, link only the first mention except where there are special circumstances (image captions are sometimes wikilinked again, and if the last use of the wikilink is further back in a long article, we also might wikilink again, etc.)

Anyway, explore and be prepared to learn - old-timers won't always accept your changes at your first attempt, just as in real life!

Best wishes,

Samsara 18:13, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Elements of Advertising (January 22)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 11:14, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 14:03, 7 August 2021 (UTC)