User talk:Wjansen08/sandbox

Good job. But 'With the topic at hand being why police officers would want to go to a four year university versus a two year technical college, this article can shed light on why many police officers don't even go to police academies in present day.' seems to be kind of a drawn out sentence. Otherwise good job! Jessben12 (talk)

Good start to your Literature Review, I am sure that you will be developing these paragraphs more. Kdrost09 (talk) 21:27, 14 February 2011 (UTC)

CSkibba07 Good start and development, it looks like an interesting topic.

winona2012 Great start, your have the required amount of sources and you have summarized the articles very well!

good start! looks like you have a lot of interest in your topic. AHughes08 (talk) 22:30, 14 February 2011 (UTC)

Cbrignull07 Nice start, it looks like you're incorporating three different elements in your literature review. I think that's a very interesting way to go about your review, and I think it will offer you a nice spectrum to conduct your research. One note though, the first article used is nearly 50 years old, and I wonder if there was a more current article or an updated article. Other than that, good work!

Good start! This is an interesting and important topic. I am sure there is plenty of information on your research question. I do not see any mechanical errors in your paragraphs, but you may want to cite your sources as you move further along. Good Luck! Swpols410 (talk) 19:09, 19 February 2011 (UTC)

Willis, very informative, I feel smarter just reading those three paragraphs. I was really interested in the findings about authoritative police officers, so you may want to include more detail about how the experiment was set up, which Im sure you were already planning on. Overall, it appears that you have a good start. Ytfig11 (talk) 23:09, 7 February 2011 (UTC)

Great start! This topic has been of interest to me for some time now as I have known individuals seek both four and two year degrees for criminal justice. I am interested in the results of you research, it seems it will be very informative! Great start on your literature review! Start using the wiki site tool to help with your citing of sources.--Cstene07 (talk) 08:24, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Good start and very interesting. It would be interesting to see what scholars have said about the effects of shifting the authority to decide police training standards from local governments to state governments. (This is mentioned in your first article) Trens07  —Preceding undated comment added 18:48, 21 February 2011 (UTC).

You have a good start to the literature review and the articles that you have chosen sound interesting. You may want to add citations and add heading so that it will be better organized. Jjdick3978 —Preceding undated comment added 20:21, 21 February 2011 (UTC).

Great start to your paper! I am interested in the results of your research. May I suggest you start citing your articles and organize your layout a little. Keep up the good work.BBurns08 (talk) 21:09, 21 February 2011 (UTC)BBurns08

Good start. Interesting topic as well, there should be plenty of information about this topic out there as well. --Sjmiller6748 (talk) 03:09, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

Your peers have provided some excellent feedback. Trens07 - great insight! Erhall (talk) 04:59, 28 February 2011 (UTC)