User talk:Wjartuso

April 2017
Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia, as you did to Holy Trinity Diocesan High School. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. —MelbourneStar ☆ talk 04:49, 5 April 2017 (UTC) I will make necessary edits to remove notable alumni and either A) create a separate page or B) add them to the notables section. I need the Performing Arts Department on the Holy Trinity Diocesan High School page to be replaced with my edits. The reasons are not promotional, but as a resource for the parents that are paying for their students to attend. For the week it was up, parents of enrolled students found it very useful in understanding the daily routine and curriculum of their children.

Additionally, the surrounding Catholic schools near Holy Trinity have extensive sections that seem to have the same kind of information. In particular, if the Performing Arts section must be reduced to three sentences, then so must sections supporting Kellenberg Memorial High School, Chaminade High School, and St. Anthony's High School.

One paragraph for St. Anthony's reads: "St. Anthony's also has a successful ice hockey team. The team won 7 straight county championships and won the New York State championship for New York State Amateur Hockey Association teams in the 2007–08 season. St. Anthony's hockey applied and was awarded membership to the Catholic High School Hockey League, part of the CHSAA, with members such as Iona Prep, Fordham Prep, Monsignor Farrell High School, Chaminade High School, and Archbishop Stepinac High School, for the 2008–09 season....The Girls Swimming Varsity team has been a powerhouse winning five consecutive championships since 2005 including the 2010 championship. They won 4 straight consecutive championships from 2004–08."

I'm unclear as to how my edits have been removed and Holy Trinity Diocesan High School's page keeps getting reduced to a minimalist structure while the surrounding schools, which I am trying to keep up with, keep expanding without edits removed.

Thanks William Artuso 13:31, 5 April 2017 (UTC)


 * is correct. The material you're adding is grossly promotional. It is also formatted incorrectly. And finally it is unsourced. If you persist in re-adding the material, you risk being blocked. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a website for parents and students. The article is not a platform for news about the "daily routine and curriculum" of the students.--Bbb23 (talk) 15:32, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

No problem, I thought you were a bot. I will leave the Performing Arts alone until I can "source appropriately" or create an additional page to reflect the history of that department. However, information such as the image and the principal must be changed. The school should at least be updated to reflect accurate information. I will be sure to do so with appropriate sources to verify. William Artuso 15:38, 5 April 2017 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Wjartuso/Queen Elizabeth's Oak


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CalOtter (talk) 01:51, 8 April 2019 (UTC)