User talk:Wjdavis3/sandbox

= Joshua Hofmann's (joshmosh06) Peer Review= Wjdvaivs3, I like your draft but there are some glaring issues you should be quick to address. 1. There are no references to be found in your draft. While this isn't a pressing issue currently, a lot of time should be spent to find more references in order to give your wiki page more credibility. 2.A couple formatting mistakes, the contents should be listed under the lead section and not at the top. 3. Your initial lead section is hard to read though. Try to keep the language rather simple and concise so the reader can quickly get a summary of what your topic is. 4. Add in some images, the article is currently a big huge block of text and I think images will help to change up the flow and improve it a lot. Overall this article has a lot of potential, just needs some more work. -Josh