User talk:Wkey

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Hello,, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on, or ask your question and then place  before the question on your talk page. Again, welcome! Firsfron of Ronchester 19:14, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
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Your edits to the Salvation article
Hello, I have unfortunately had to revert the additions you have made to the article Salvation. This is not an assessment of whether or not the information you added is true, but the tone of writing needs to conform to that which you'd find in an encyclopedia entry. In other words, it has to be written in a formal way. The links that Firsfron provided above will definitely give you a good start toward this goal. Specifically this section, which states: "Use of the second person (you), which is often ambiguous and contrary to the tone of an encyclopedia, is discouraged." That entire section will prove beneficial when considering sections such as the following that you added: "When he grants his gift of Salvation you will truly feel a salvation experience. He replaces a heart of stone with a heart of love, joy and peace. These feelings are truly heart-felt! The Holy Spirit will reveal it to you if you have been saved."

As you can see, this sounds more like a sermon than a transmission of information about the subject. If you have any questions about this, feel free to ask me on my talk page. ◄  Zahakiel   ►  18:45, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

External Links and Dinosaur
Please try not to add links to the External Links section unless the conform to WP:EL. If in doubt, discuss on the articles talk pages first. Wikipedia isn't a place to promote your own web sites, products, or services. Also, please bear in mind that the article Dinosaur is primarily about science. There are different articles called Creationist perspectives on dinosaurs and Dinosaurs in popular culture for adding dinosaur-related references in myths and art. You may want to contribute to those articles. Adding non-scientific material and links to the Dinosaur article is pointless because they will be quickly reverted. Thanks so much! Neale Neale Monks 19:39, 18 July 2007 (UTC)