User talk:Wnk.ana

Feedback on your article
Hello Wnk.ana, Thank you for writing your article in your sandbox! I have read the article and would like to give some feedback to improve your article to Wikipedia standards and customs. While your tutor will judge it content wise, I will look if it meets the quality standards we have on Wikipedia. I standard look for a series of subjects that need improvement or are okay. I hope you can already implement this feedback to your sandbox article before our coming meeting today. Thanks! Romaine (talk) 09:05, 25 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Intro sentence: good!
 * Links: good!
 * Headers: sufficient, but no need to capitalise the C in "Historical Context". Usually we only make the first character of a header capitalised, unless it is a given name.
 * References: Thank you for starting with inline references. But you need to use much more references: the common practise is to add a reference behind every paragraph, and after every two or three sentences.
 * Other: Please make less text bold, normally we use bold text only in the first sentence. Use Italics instead of bold.
 * Ready to publish: No. References are besides good writing the most important part of Wikipedia articles. Without inline references, an article is not ready to be published.
 * PS: Please look if you can expand the historical context. Also "great impact" is vague and needs clarification.
 * And the reception of the book is still missing. Please use "Reception" instead of "Criticism", also good receptions need to be included. Romaine (talk) 09:27, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

Hello Wnk.ana, You asked me to look at your page again. Coming Monday morning early I will review again. Romaine (talk) 16:18, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Links: usually we only link in an article only once to another Wikipedia article. It is not needed to link multiple times to Franz Hartmann.
 * References: Please add them behind the dot, instead of before the dot, and no space between dot and reference. References have been improved. I would suggest also to add a reference after the last sentence of Historical context.
 * Reception/21st century: still missing.